Leya and Jack Under the sea 5 sentence challenge

Under the sea is lots of colourfull fish swimming round.

Also there are lots of  white sharks eatin bueatifull fish.

The rocks shimmer from the bottem of the lovely sea.

The octapus has 8 legs and is sttiking to evrething. [and can’t get them of]

Seashells are smashing when you through them in the shinning sea.

5 thoughts on “Leya and Jack Under the sea 5 sentence challenge

  1. well done Leya and Jack. think you can put more ajectives

  2. well done love what you have done in your work for under the sea fabuless work you dizerv a pat on the back.

  3. Some very good work but practice more on your spellings ok. you are in year 3/4 !

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