100 Word Challenge Tyler C

My favourite story re-told


There was total silence in the scorching gymnasium. Nothing was making a single noise-not even the brass instruments, not the radio that was always belching out. Everyone picked up their brass instrument.

“Ready…. Steady……GO!!!” Everyone put their instruments to their lips. It was so quiet that the sounds of the warm October afternoon outside could not be heard not even the birds elegantly singing, a lawn mower humming and the laughter of little, snotty- nosed children playing. However the gym was dark. And it was getting even darker.

“Go” Mr Madson yelled  swinging a stick in a majestic arc.

2 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge Tyler C

  1. This is a very intriguing piece of writing, Tyler… What book is it about?
    I really like your last line, as “majestic arc” really creates an image in my mind.

    Well done 🙂

  2. Hi Tyler,
    Thanks for submitting this very well-written entry to the 100 word challenge. The book sounds very interesting from your excerpt. Good work!

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