Abbie B 5 Sentence Challenge

Under the sea

 

As I went deeper into the sea, I saw some colourful fish swimming to their home anxiously .After that I saw the pink river dolphin jumping up and down searching for food nosily. The ground started to shake all the creatures scurried away nervously.  As I started to breathe many bubbles blew from my mouth and circled me. Later that day I saw a mermaid

Swimming into a silver shell and then she glowed in joy.

One thought on “Abbie B 5 Sentence Challenge

  1. Hello Abbie,

    You have used some wonderful words in your sentences. They helped me make pictures in my mind as I imagined what you described. Well done! 🙂

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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