Lucy E 5 Sentence Challenge

Down in the deep blue sea

where all the fish are swimming wildly round the stones and coral are flowing.

But suddenly a shark pounced

Out from behind a rather large pile of sand.

He was so hungry that he ate all of the fish, and all that was left was water mixed with blood.

But then he was still starving and he wished that the fish would come back.

Unluckily they couldn’t come because they had been eaten

One thought on “Lucy E 5 Sentence Challenge

  1. Hello Lucy,

    The poor fish! It doesn’t look like a good idea to be a fish with a hungry shark around. Well done. 🙂

    Try not to split sentences when you make a post. Here is your second sentence as it might have looked on your post…
    Suddenly a shark pounced out from behind a rather large pile of sand.

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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