Under the sea

 

As I was walking along the bright beach, I heard the seagulls squawking up above. It was beautiful here. The waves splashing on thE BRIGHTLY , coated sand beneath me. Suddenly I saw a gigantic wave coming towards me in seconds. In one big gulp , it had swallowed me Under the sea…

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  1. Hello Samuel,

    Your sentences tell us a complete story as your walk along the beach turns into an adventure under the sea. I found your first senence very interesting. It had me thinking of a walk along the beach near my home. Well done! 🙂

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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