Under the sea

Under the sea, I saw an octopus wearing a wedding ring and a wedding dress. Also I saw a bundle of blue fish. After that I saw grey sting rays that floated around the place. Then I saw a blue whale swimming all around me. Finally I saw a white shark came…

2 thoughts on “Under the sea

  1. Hello Jacob,

    I thought the idea of an octopus wearing a wedding ring and a wedding dress was very funny. You have written five very interesting sentences but your last sentences has me worried the shark might have caught you. Well done! 🙂

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Hello Jacob,

    You have written five very interesting sentences but your last sentences has me worried the shark might have caught you. I thought the idea of an octopus wearing a wedding ring and a wedding dress was very funny. Well done! 🙂

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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