Cody 5 sentence challenge

Under sea there is beautiful gray dilphin swims swishing his tale side to side . Under the sea there is a scary black whale frriightning every thing in his path .   IN the sea there is a terfing starfish he kept scering everybody in the sea  so his mum toled him to stop and he did . under the sea there is a nice litte fish he all ways arked nicley for things . under the sea there is tertol is bad .

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  1. Cody, this is a good descriptive peice becasue you have used good descriptive text. To improve you may need to proof fread your text and anlyse your launguage before you publish. But overall well done!

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