under the sea

As I went deeper into the sea, I saw some colourful fish swimming to their home anxiously .After that I saw the pink river dolphin jumping up and down searching for food nosily. The ground started to shake all the creatures scurried away nervously. As I started to breath many bubbles blew from my mouth and circled me. Later that day I saw a marmade
Swimming into a silver shell and then she glowed in joy.

One thought on “under the sea

  1. Hello again Abbie B,

    This is your third story post. I am impressed by the improvements you have made to your story at each step. When I write, I often have to make changes. All good writers do this. Well done. 🙂

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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